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It was one of the last cars left on the Murder Lot. A gruesome scene. No matter who worked for how long with what chemicals, the blood never came out. Seeping in with the rain, they said. An antique of a bulldozer-cum-snowplow was parked nearby—the very same one used to hold Old Man Clark face down in the snowdrift until he stopped kicking—to distract from the rusted heap of haunted. One-by-one each vehicle in the lot was cataloged then crushed to make room for the mall expansion. All but that one, though not for lack of trying.
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Twilight Zone contender!
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Thanks! That’s a nice compliment. 🙂
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Love where you took this one. Dark with a hair-raising end!
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Thank you Carrie. It’s been a while since I wrote something a little twisted, but I was lacking a solid foundation until I read a murder mystery short this morning. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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Definitely a place to avoid. But wonderful that the mall wasn’t expanded. Something positive.
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Rumor has it the car is still there. 😉
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Great idea… a junk yard for murder scenes! Nice story.
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Thank you Ruth. I should ask my police officer friends if such a place actually exists. I bet the ghosts are aplenty there.
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Shades of ‘Christine’ in this fine piece. Haunted steel now makes up 1% of all razor blades. I’m growing my beard. Well told.
Aloha,
Doug
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1%? Well, that would explain why I cut my legs every time I shave. 🙂 Thanks for stopping by Doug!
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A car with an independent streak. Nicely done.
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Indeed. Or that streak could have been the ghosts going by. 🙂 Either way, that’s not a car I want to drive.
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Really well told.
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Thank you
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I just love having a murder lot!
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Don’t you?! So many stories!
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Very dark. It sounds like the start of a fantastic story!
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Thank you!
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Dear Melanie,
Twilight Zone and Christine both came to my mind, too. Nothing spookier than an inanimate object with a mind of its own and a license to kill. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Nothing spookier indeed. Thank you Rochelle.
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Well told. Gave me the creeps – makes me want to look sideways at my car just … in…case….
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And think twice about that new used car…
Thank you
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That sounds like a really sinister place. I sense dark forces at work. Creepy.
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It sure does. I don’t think I’ll be signing up for tours any time soon.
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I like that it hints to the fact it cannot be destroyed, nicely done.
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I think that’s what makes it creepy. Thank you!
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