Friday Fictioneers is a weekly blog link-up led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at Addicted to Purple. The Challenge – write a one hundred word (plus or minus) story with a beginning, middle, and end inspired by the picture*. The Key – make every word count.
The picture is worth a thousand words. These are another one hundred.
*Image Copyright © Stephen Baum
BE MINE
She stopped when she saw the shadow: two lines, like legs. Her gut tightened. Detective Michaels had told her, Never take the same way twice. She considered turning back. He knows your routine; to avoid him, avoid routine. She had, mostly.
“I am not afraid!” Her words echoed. Footsteps echoed with them.
The cards said, BE MINE. One a week for a year, no matter where she slept.
She turned quickly and crashed into a man. “Watch it,” he said, and walked on. She breathed relief, slowed down, turned the corner, and crashed into another man.
He said, “be mine.”
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This is one of the few situations where you wish you lived in an “open-carry” state, so you could pull out your .45 Magnum and empty it into the bastard. Sianara sucker!
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Too bad she didn’t just carry one anyway, considering her stalker’s lack of respect for the law.
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Ouch.. to finally face your stalker.. this would not be the right place. chilling.
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No, it certainly wouldn’t. An empty and isolated tunnel is no place for confrontation, unless you’re the stalker, of course..
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Nope, not creepy at all… This is well done. I like the clean background and the double-twist surprise.
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Thank you Rants. I wanted a little Gotcha! in this one.
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I second Bjorn. Definitely not the place to meet a stalker. I suppose she’d have had her guard down after the first crash turned out a dud.
Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
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It’s a wonder she could let her guard down, though, in this place, it’s not likely to have mattered one way or the other.
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Every woman’s worst nightmare chillingly brought alive. My gut tightened too …. very powerful piece.
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Thank you Just Joyfulness. It is a nightmare, all too real for too many.
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Some folk so overdo Valentine’s.
Good piece.
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Right they do. And then there’s those who take it to a whole ‘nother level.
Thanks micklively!
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I avoid tunnels!
Rosey Pinkerton’s blog
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Probably a good idea, stalker or no.
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the cards said, BE MINE. One a week for a year, no matter where she slept.
This line reminds me of Christan Grey I dunno why
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A creep is a creep is a creep, me thinks.
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hmmm gravadee….so it does cause he seemed creepy too and Anna described him as a Stalker King.
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I am not by nature, chicken; however, I would not walk alone through a spooky tunnel! Scary!
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There are some things that don’t make you a chicken, but smart. Not venturing alone into a creepy, empty tunnel is one of them. 🙂
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Oh my, Melanie! You took me for a ride with this one. Yours is my favorite this week! Great stuff. 🙂
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Oh thank you Amy. What a great compliment! 🙂
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Eee, very scary. If she screams loud enough, maybe the other one comes to the rescue?
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Somehow I doubt it…not many people seemed too concerned with others, even when screaming is involved. 😦
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Thank you for a new and unexpected fear of tunnels.
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Bang! Bang! echoed the tunnel. Shakingly she focused her eyes on her stalker lying in a pool of blood and suddenly other man stepped out from back. Oh…’Michael- The angel who saved her’.
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Great! Had I a few more words, this would have been a great ending. Twist, twist, and twist again…she is saved!
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Thanks…
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thanks.. 🙂
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