Friday Fictioneers is a weekly blog link-up led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at Addicted to Purple. The Challenge – write a one hundred word (plus or minus) story with a beginning, middle, and end inspired by the picture*. The Key – make every word count.
The picture is worth a thousand words. These are another one hundred.
Before Dark
*Image Copyright © Madison Woods
The drive-thru was empty. The window was shut reflecting the field she had followed trying to figure out how she had come to be walking barefoot in nowhere.
She looked in the window. Peered around. Knocked. No one noticed.
She looked at the window and saw the field, saw the paramedics lifting her onto a gurney, her shoes on the ground, her missing windshield, the upside-down truck, the bright lights, the band, the dancing, the affair, children, marriage, college, high school, elementary, fishing, doll houses, scraping her knee, hugging her mom, and her vision closed in on her and disappeared.
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100 words. Fiction. Feedback is always appreciated.
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Life flashes before you.
Very clever piece: well done.
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Thank you! I knew I wanted to use the reflection somehow. I’m glad my idea worked.
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Great story. Very sad.
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Thank you!
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Well done. Very effective !
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I’m so glad to hear it was effective. Thanks!
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My goodness that’s sad. Great use of the prompt though!
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It is. I was sad writing it. Thanks for reading.
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Great take, Melanie. I like the images and memories you chose for the flashes of one’s life. Well done.
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Thank you Amy. It was tough to pick enough common times of life to capture a whole life, but not so many as to be too specific and/or go over the word count.
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Outstanding!
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Wow! Thank you! 🙂
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Life just passes at that end.. shrinking in on you, and why not in the drive-through?
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Drive-thru’s have probably contributed to their fair share of life endings, so might as well set one here, even if it was a car accident.
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She took her final journey, at least here on earth. Well told!
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That she did. Thank you Yolanda!
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Its sad, but guess thats how life is
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It is sad. A life lost too soon.
Thank you for reading. 🙂
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Good use of the reflection. I like how you caught the backwards spin on life.
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Thank you! I wrote it forward to be sure it was right backward. 🙂 Glad it worked.
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Life being replayed in rewind. Nicely done.
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Thank you!
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Wow!
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Thank you!
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