Friday Fictioneers is a weekly blog link-up led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at Addicted to Purple. The Challenge – write a one hundred word (plus or minus) story with a beginning, middle, and end inspired by the picture*. The Key – make every word count.
*Image © C.E. Ayr
Bingo!
“E twenty-seven,” the Bingo caller yelled.
There is no E. I need new batteries in my hearing-aids, Betty thought as she searched the B-column on her cards.
“E forty-eight,” echoed through the Bingo hall.
The number snapped Betty to that night fifty years ago. The night she ran until her shoe slipped off at parking spot number E48. She saw it topple off the curb to the street. Then he was on her. Then she was on the ground. Her stockings torn, purse gone.
She looked up to the caller to exit the memory. Bingo! That’s why he looked familiar.
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Wow. Nicely done.
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Thank you Van! 🙂
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Wow…the twist…reminded me of the first time when I read your post. I love your stories that have a twist in their very last word.
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Awww! Thank you. I appreciate that.
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My daughter was recently conversing with a co-worker who said “Bingo” each time she was in agreement with a certain concept for their workforce implementation. She chuckled as she related this little quirk. I shall now be more aware of my parking spots. Actually I always take an iPick of where I am, especially at airports. Good job Mel. Have a great day, semper
vigilant.
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I giggle any time I hear someone say bingo in conversation. I also take a picture of where I’ve parked, especially at the airport. 🙂
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What a strange flash-back.
Good piece.
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You never know what will trigger a memory for someone. Thanks Mick!
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Well done. I love this.
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I’m so glad to hear. Thank you!
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Oooo, very good!
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Thank you Robyn! I’ve been a bad reader lately. I haven’t caught up with my new life and schedule yet. I hope you are well.
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Very good. That’s one unusual bingo caller. To think that he’s gotten away with it for fifty years!
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Hopefully his new profession (and age) means he’s changed his ways. Thanks Margaret.
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Ooh, how freaky that he ended up being the Bingo caller, a seemingly innocent activity. Nice twist and intricately woven story. Great job, Melanie.
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You never know what direction someone’s life might take. Thanks Amy! 🙂
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wow! nice 🙂
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Thanks! 🙂
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was the caller him?
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Betty seems to think it just might be.
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It’s a great story about Karma, but there’s no 27 in the B column. 🙂
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oh…busted! I didn’t even think to research what numbers might be in the B column.
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Excellent! Good set up. Surprising end.
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Thank you!
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Very cool how you set that up. Bingo!
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Thank you Dawn. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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Loved this.
Well built and well finished.
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I’m happy to hear this. Thank you CE.
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I am passionate about my BINGO! Not a great time for dejavu !
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Indeed, or you could miss a number. 🙂 Thanks!
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And that is unforgivable!
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