Friday Fictioneers is a weekly blog link-up led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at Addicted to Purple. The Challenge – write a one hundred word (plus or minus) story with a beginning, middle, and end inspired by the picture*. The Key – make every word count.
*Image © Amy Reese
Janitor Jamison and The Delinquents
Long before the steps decayed, before they cracked and the railing rusted, before weeds grew through gaps; long before Janitor Jamison taught the delinquent-becoming teens of Jones High the consequences of an ill-spent youth while they scrubbed the scuffs from the floors and toilets as punishment for skipping class and smoking on campus, Jamison was one of them. Of course, then, Jones High was new and the stairs leading off campus were as bright and shining as his future; the future he squandered skipping class and smoking on campus without a Janitor Jamison to lead him in a better direction.
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100 words. Feedback is appreciated. Click below to read other creative contributions to this week’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt.
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Very nice ! ☺
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Thanks Van! 🙂
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Oh, I like this very, very much. A different and fantastic take.
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I’m so happy to hear that. Thank you Alicia! 🙂
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Brought back memories from my youth. An occasional Luck Strike down in the basement behind the coal furnace. #2 school, Audubon, NJ ,Circa 1955. You rekindled the past Mel. Semper Fi
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Ahhh…when you could still light up inside without setting off every smoke alarm in the building. I’m happy to hear this story churned some memories. That’s a high compliment.
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Excellent flow building suspense; uniquely creative. Very good.
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I stared at this forever wondering if it was any good, then decided it probably was. It makes me happy you think it is.
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Wonderful, Melanie! I like your tie into the stairs and your description of them, too. Sometimes all anyone needs is that person who can steer them straight, so as to not slip those cracks.
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Sometimes all someone needs is somebody to care.
Your last sentence gave me the idea that I could have wrapped it all up better by ending with “without a Janitor Jamison to keep him from slipping through the cracks.”
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You could! Sure, use it! Glad I could help. It could wrap it up quite nicely.
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I guess we need our cautionary tales people, just so we don’t become one.
Great story! I hope you’ll read mine here.
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Cautionary tales are good for us, if we listen. Thanks Alice.
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I like this. Those are the kind of mentors we need.
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Wonderful. I like the description, the story, everything. Teaching by example is the most efficient way.
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Thank you! 🙂 I agree, teaching by example can leave a lasting impression.
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