Friday Fictioneers is a weekly blog link-up led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at Addicted to Purple. The Challenge – write a one hundred word story with a beginning, middle, and end inspired by the picture*. The Key – make every word count.
*Image © ceayr
Reputation Intact
Jason took the blindfold off Sandra. She gasped at the house before her, complete with a red bow on the door.
“You bought us the Murder House?” Sandra playfully punched Jason.
“Happy Anniversary!” Jason kissed Sandra’s cheek.
“I could kill you.”
“Don’t let the house hear you say that.”
Ten years prior, the previous owners were murdered inside. The crime was never solved.
On their third date Sandra had mentioned to Jason she fancied the house and dreamed of being the amateur sleuth who solved the mystery. She came close, but the house is back on the market: reputation intact.
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100 words. Feedback is appreciated. Click below to read other creative contributions to this week’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt.
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Oh, my, Melanie. You did a great job of pulling that out of the hat. Great plot, surprising plot, with a grabbing title.
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked it. I was confident about this one and figured that meant I did something wrong.
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Don’t you hate that when it happens?
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Oh I do! I’m the worst at gagging my own writing. I suppose that’s normal though.
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Oh, no!! Very succinct story. Well done, Melanie.
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Much appreciated. Thank you Amy.
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Insert evil laugh here.
Nicely done!
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Wow. Well, thank you. You’re such a good storyteller. I’m honored you enjoyed this.
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Thank you for the compliment.
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Nice idea, well told
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Thanks! 🙂
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Without a doubt, you “nailed it.”
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🙂 Thank you!
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Oooo nice end… I wonder how often it goes on the market?
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Thanks! It seems it’s destined to be “on the market.”
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Crisp and Bang on. A fiction treat.
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How kind. Thank you.
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You executed another one that should be a short story. Continue writing Mel.
Semper Fi
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Thanks so much. I do plan to keep writing. I enjoy it too much not to. 🙂
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Whoa! awesome! 🙂 loved it.
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Awwww…thank you!
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You are welcome 🙂
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Reputation Intact is such a tease! I want the whole story, no, I want the whole book!
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Oh my. Thank you! I’m thrilled you enjoyed it so much that you want more. 🙂
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Oh, this made me suck in my breath and laugh. Does that make me a bad person or you a delightful writer? Either way, well done.
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I highly doubt you are a bad person. I’m equally unsure I’m a “delightful writer.” I think I’ve practiced enough that occasionally I get it right. I felt good about this one. I’m glad I wasn’t completely off with that feeling. Thank you for sharing your reaction.
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Ouch… If wall could be loquacious… so many secrets here. You really delivered a surprise in the end…
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There are many secrets, none of which, apparently, desire to be uncovered.
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Whoops. That truly is a house with personality. Creepy and fun story.
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Haha-how romantic? Nice work.
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I think they thought it was…at first.
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