Friday Fictioneers is a weekly blog link-up. The Challenge – write a one hundred word (plus or minus) story with a beginning, middle, and end inspired by the picture. The Key – make every word count. Up to the challenge? Join in!
Four Generations and a Funeral
Charles Jefferson Anderson, III, Charlie-T to family, hopped on a rocker and watched Great Grandpa Charles in the other.
“Why are you out here alone Pa?” Charlie-T asked.
“It’s quiet,” Charles answered. “Did I ever tell you about the fool who broke his tooth on this porch?” Charlie-T said no, although he knew the story nearly verbatim.
He sat quietly, alternating between looking at Pa and looking at his feet. “And that’s how I knew Great Granny Jenny would be my wife,” Charles concluded. Some of the mourners were leaving.
“I miss her, Pa,” Charlie-T said.
“Me too,” Charles said.
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100 words. Fiction. Feedback is always appreciated. Comments of any kind really — so long as they are related to the post. What story comes to mind when you see that picture? Join in!
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Very nicely written – my kind of story Melanie, Thank you.
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Why thank you Paul. And you’re welcome. 🙂
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Such a sad, bittersweet little story. Well done. 🙂
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Thank you!
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Good Story. Sharing of stories through the generations is important.
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It is important, and it’s good little Charlie gave Pa the time to share, even if it was a repeat. Thank you Judith.
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Love the title, Melanie. Ah, the story-telling that you must endure. Really well done. Nice one!
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Thank you Amy. Yeah, those grandparents (and great grandparents) are good for telling stories, again and again. I’m glad Charlie was willing to listen, again.
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What a sweet story.
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🙂 Thank you.
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Lovely!
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Thanks Dawn.
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Sad. Nicely done. Long may the generations enjoy the company of each other.
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Thank you Patrick.
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I love how you managed to create such a complex and intriguing story on just 100 words, that’s really cool!
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Thank you Hannah. It’s a fun exercise to cram as much as possible in so few words, while still making sense. lol! Thanks for stopping by. 🙂
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Dear Melanie,
I liked the wistfulness of this.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle.
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Got right into that little story.
Wow
Rato
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Glad to hear. 🙂 Thanks Rato.
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Nicely drawn characters. I love how the younger one is so patient with Great Grandpa. Sad but warm.
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Thank you Margaret. I was happy to see Charlie-T’s character form as a loving, kind boy.
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