Through The Ages

Friday Fictioneers is a weekly blog link-up led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at Addicted to PurpleThe Challenge – write a one hundred word (plus or minus) story with a beginning, middle, and end inspired by the picture*. The Key – make every word count.

The picture is worth a thousand words. Below are my one hundred.

*Image © Dale Rogerson

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Through The Ages

The Great Storm dumped the chair in the lake. The lake revealed it once the waters receded.

As a small boy, I felt its loneliness in its abandonment. In the middle years, it became a memorial to that summer, to the hurricane so harrowing friends and neighbors disappeared overnight. As a teenager it was a testament to the long-standing decline of home. Proof of the filth otherwise whitewashed.

But on the eve of my first deployment, I ached to take it with me as a talisman, a connection. And so I took its picture and keep it in my helmet.

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100 words. Feedback is appreciated. Click below to read other creative contributions to this week’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt.

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30 thoughts on “Through The Ages

  1. Nicely written piece, Melanie! This reminds me of when I saw the bottom of our lake here in town. It was pretty fascinating to see all the history and mysteries revealed when the lake bed was exposed.

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  2. It love how you describe the young man’s growing up, looking with growing understanding of the world at the always-present old chair. It’s very powerful how you made it a constant in his life, something he can rely on to be there, and link him to what’s worth fighting for.

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    • Thank you so much for such a thorough interpretation. I’m thrilled you got this out of the story. It’s just what I was hoping for.

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