Friday Fictioneers is a weekly blog link-up. The Challenge – write a one hundred word (plus or minus) story with a beginning, middle, and end inspired by the picture. The Key – make every word count. Up to the challenge? Join in!
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Owl Creek, Tennessee — Confederate sympathizer Peyton Farquhar was hanged for treason yesterday in a public ceremony at the Owl Creek trestle for the planned sabotage of the Union route to victory. Farquhar admitted his scheme to a Union scout disguised in a grey uniform to capture Confederate soldiers in the area. The execution was swift and public to discourage Rebels from continued interference of railways critical to Union advancements. Over forty witnesses gathered at the scene, and several reported Farquhar stood tall as Union soldiers slipped the noose over his head. His body was left hanging as the crowd dispersed.
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100 words. Fiction. The picture reminded me of Ambrose Bierce’s “An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge.” After several attempts at another angle of Bierce’s story of a hanging, I went with a journalistic style. Feedback is always appreciated. Comments of any kind really — so long as they are related to the post. What story comes to mind when you see that picture? Join in!
Today marks one year since I began writing these 100-word stories. Sturdy was published on March 13, 2014, and I had no idea what I was doing. Still don’t, but I think I’ve really grown as a writer since I started forcing myself into such a tightly packed little package. In the last year, I have managed to put together 43 of these stories. I’m excited to see what the next year holds for pictures, stories, and the practice of writing.
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What a horrific scene. Having people watch it all happen is just as horrible as the actual hanging. Well written.
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Executions have long been a public spectacle, and it’s so macabre. Thanks Amy!
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I like the style you took. I wish more “journalists” would take it.
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Thanks Dawn! I knew what story I wanted to tell, but picking an angle was hard. I’m glad you liked my final choice.
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Yikes! Justice was swift in them days.
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Yes it was. No time wasted on appeals and whatnot. Death row was a line of prisoners not a section of the jail.
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Freaky in a good way.
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Thanks Gibber. The original story is too. It’s one I’ve never forgotten.
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Cleverly written. Nice, tight journalism her. No videos back then, thank god.
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Thank you Patrick. The Civil War photography is creepy enough. Thank goodness indeed there was no video.
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It’s sad that things like that ever went on – a public hanging. This was excellent and I like the “journalistic” take on it.
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Thanks Priceless Joy. It’s disturbing how public executions were and still are. Now we make it “civil” with sterile rooms and needles over town square and ropes.
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Yes that’s true! In the state of Utah I heard on the news, they are trying to bring back the firing squad.
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I heard that too, that they want it as a back-up option when the lethal injection meds aren’t available. It’ll be interesting to see what the outcome is.
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Yes, it will. I hope it doesn’t pass.
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i was not aware that civil war was real brutal till i read about it in Lincoln by Gore Vidal, well written post
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Thank you! The Civil War was terrible. The battles, the environment, the conditions…all of it. It’s a wonder anyone survived.
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Dear Melanie,
Happy FF anniversary. Horribly good story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle. I’ve grown so much as a writer this past year. I can’t wait to see what fun comes of this next year. Thank you for all your work running this challenge.
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I think writing this in journalistic style worked VERY well.
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I agree. The story didn’t need someone to tell the reader how to feel. Laying out the facts of the occurrence(however fictional they may be) as such made me feel like the author respected me as a reader enough to let me judge the situation for myself.
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Thank you JB & T.
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Very well done and you did the style flawlessly.
janet
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Thank you Janet. I wrote for newspapers in and just out of college. It’s a good feeling to know I can still pull off the style. 🙂
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I liked the way you wrote the story like a newspaper article too. Nicely done.
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Thank you Creatopath. 🙂
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