Friday Fictioneers is a weekly blog link-up. The Challenge – write a one hundred word (plus or minus) story with a beginning, middle, and end inspired by the picture. The Key – make every word count. Up to the challenge? Join in!
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Outside, boys stood on the corner and dared each other to jump and touch the door.
Billy whispered, “I bet the old man is watching.”
Johnny said, “Probably.”
Derrick said, “He cooked his son and served him to his mom for dinner. Then killed her, too.”
“Liar,” Johnny said.
Inside, the old man checked his son’s machines, tucked the sheets, and noted his vitals. Then he donned fairy wings and sat to tea from polka-dot cups in two chairs better fit for the dolls that were his company while his five-year-old granddaughter bounced about serving her guests, stuffed and breathing alike.
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101 words. Fiction. Feedback is always appreciated. Comments of any kind really — so long as they are related to the post. What story comes to mind when you see that picture? Join in!
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“Anyone different is a target.” I like the theme.
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Thanks Mick. Different is a target, unfortunately.
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Awww, heart rending Melanie. And so true. Thank you. A post to keep in mind when we are dismissive or judgmental of others.
Oh, as an aside Melanie, I have a guest post over at Cordelia’s Mom http://cordeliasmomstill.com/2015/04/02/busted-guest-post-by-paul-curran/comment-page-1/#comment-9856 and I would be honored if you had the time to drop by for a read. Thank You.
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Thanks Paul. I knew by Tuesday, no matter the setting, there would probably be a murderer-not-a-murderer twist. I was glad to see the closed door in the photo.
I’ll stop by for a read now. Thanks for letting me know. 🙂
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behind closed doors….even when access is difficult.
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Closed doors hide everything.
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Great!
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Thanks! 🙂
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I love this. No one knows what happens behind closed doors. Caregivers are the unsung hero’s of our days. No longer do we have a village to care for each other. Very sad reality.
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Family is who we come in with and family is who we go out with. You’re right that the village is no longer an extension of family. Unfortunate.
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Very well told story that plucked my heartstrings. Kudos.
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Thanks Alicia. I’m glad to hear it worked for you.
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Such a sweet story with a sad mood. I enjoyed reading your story.
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Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Beautiful story, charming, unnerving, and very sad.
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Thank you, Sandra, for your kind comment.
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Beautiful… I guess the boys were having a “Boo Radley Moment”…
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I guess they were. 🙂 Like so many groups of kids with kids’ imaginations.
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Excellent – really excellent stuff. Very believable characters in such a small space.
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Thanks MJL. I’m thrilled to hear it worked so well for you.
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How interesting…… Two different points of view based on nothing but a picture….. Only a few words and yet the mind can create and morph its own novel around them. Very influencing. Thank you for sharing.
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It’s such a fun writing challenge, and really makes me want each word. Thanks for reading!
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Well THAT was creepy!
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Thanks Dawn!
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Love this. It reminds me of that saying about not judging others because everyone is fighting a battle we know nothing about. Well done.
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Thanks Amie! That’s exactly what I was going for. 🙂
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So sad. I love your characters – the contrast between the boys’ chatter and what’s really going on in there is wonderful.
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I was going for a stark difference. 🙂 Thank you Margaret.
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It is funny yet an eye opener at the same time.The kind of writing that makes you smile and also leave you thoughtful.
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Thank you! I’m glad it was a thoughtful piece. 🙂
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