Friday Fictioneers is a weekly blog link-up led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at Addicted to Purple. The Challenge – write a one hundred word (plus or minus) story with a beginning, middle, and end inspired by the picture. The Key – make every word count.
The picture is worth a thousand words. These are another one hundred.
*Image Copyright © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
The Brass
There had been one unaccounted-for body until a hotel clerk reported a suspicious note. Detectives Frank and Sam McCann responded.
“The lobby’s locked midnight to six,” he said. “Security didn’t see nobody, but this is here.” He pointed to the note taped to the wall — The Brass. “And that light’s dripping goo.”
“Brass flowers,” Sam said. “His last note.”
Frank climbed the ladder maintenance brought him and peered into the chandelier. “Call it in, Sam,” Frank said. “A head and another note. Body’s in the gardens.”
“Why brass flowers?” Sam asked.
“A message,” Frank answered. “And not one we want.”
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100 words. Fiction – a continuation of what is becoming The Florist Series. For more stories of The Florist read, “They Called Him ‘The Florist’” and “In His Father’s Footsteps“.
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As an ex truck driver I can recognize a headlight anywhere. Bwahahaha! Well done Mel.
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Thanks Paul! 🙂
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😀
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A mini thriller—loved this one!
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Thanks Carrie. Of all my serial killers, I think this one is my favorite (as twisted as that sounds).
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Haha!
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The more twisted the more we like them, Great read, love a good thriller!
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Thanks Yolanda! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂 There’s two others with this same killer, and a couple other mass murder stories in my Friday Fictioneers portfolio. It’s cathartic when life gets tough. Odd as that may be. 🙂
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Ah, a little continuation of the flowers theme! Nice one, Melanie. The brass relates to the chandelier, right?
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Thanks Amy.
The brass could be the chandelier, or perhaps an allusion to the perpetrator’s identity.
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A ha! I thought you might say that. 🙂
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We’ll have to see…but it would make a nice twist. Officer Johns from the first story hasn’t come back into a chapter yet…
Who knows. I’m not even sure, to be honest. The next chapter will likely be determined by whatever picture inspires it.
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That’s great. Just roll with it! It could serve as your outline for your book that you’ll be writing. 🙂
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The Florist would make for a good book. Maybe some day. 🙂
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Yes! It will.
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A serial killer on the loose always captures the imagination.
Good piece.
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The mystery deepens. A serial killer serial – like it.
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Curiouser and curiouser… 😉
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Indeed.
Thanks! 🙂
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