Friday Fictioneers is a weekly blog link-up led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at Addicted to Purple. The Challenge – write a one hundred word (plus or minus) story with a beginning, middle, and end inspired by the picture*. The Key – make every word count.
The picture is worth a thousand words. These are another one hundred.
*Image Copyright © G.L. MacMillan
…Recovery Ranch
“Why don’t she let nobody in there?” asked Jude, the newest at the ranch.
“She don’t want to,” Harlem answered. “Shut your face. Be glad you got a bed and food.” He smacked Jude upside his head. Jude moved to punch Harlem, but Nomy walked outside.
“Calm yourselves, boys,” she said. “This is a glass house, and I shall throw no stones, but you will throw no punches, or it’s back on the streets for you.”
Fourteen heads bowed. Two more than allowed by license, but Nomy knew the Sheriff would only bring, not take away. It was her penance.
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Well done Mel.
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Thank you Paul!
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Excellent.
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Thanks! 😄
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Left me wanting to know more about Nomy.
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Something led her to this work, but she doesn’t seem the type to share. Thanks so much for reading. 🙂
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Great hook for a book. I would read more.
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It could totally go book length, to explore the ranch resident’s history alongside Nomy’s.
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Go, girl, go. I’ll sit in your “go get ’em” corner.
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Penance for what? Now you’ve got my head spinning – in a good way.
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Could be anything, I suppose. I imagine she was once without a roof over her head much like the ranch kids are now, but what led everyone down that path, I’m not entirely sure. Just that they are lucky to have each other. Thanks for reading Alicia.
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I’m always happy when I find your 100 word stories in my feed, Melanie.
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What a great compliment! And so encouraging. Thank you Dina.
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Don’t throw stones at glass houses, good advice. Nicely done!
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Indeed you shouldn’t (but we all do from time to time, don’t we). Thanks Yolanda.
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Excellent story.
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Thanks so much!
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You could do a George RR Martin style chapter-by-character thing with all of the residents. I’m already hooked.
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And bring them all together at the dinner table every few chapters to fill in some of the details. Great idea. Thanks!
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Nice one, I tried my hand at this – https://shaktikisharma.wordpress.com/2015/07/31/colors-of-death/
Go through if u like.
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Glad to see you gave it a go. 🙂
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A very interesting piece, lots of potential for further development.
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Yes, potential. It’s not quite the complete piece I thought it was: too much in my head, not enough on paper. Thanks for reading Sandra.
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Intriguing idea! Great title too.
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Thanks! I appreciate your kind words.
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I wonder what Nomy has done? Maybe the sheriff is covering something up for her, or maybe it’s a self-imposed penance for some real or imagined past indiscretion. Sounds like she’s doing right by her charges, though.
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I imagined Nomy was also a runaway and wants to help others break the cycle. But it could be anything. I didn’t develop this very well. It’s more of a chapter than a story. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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You left me wondering why and that’s a good thing.
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I’m glad that’s a good thing. 🙂 Thanks Tracey!
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It has a John Irving feel to it.
Well done.
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Wow, he’s quite a writer. Thank you Mick!
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Good story, very intriguing. Great characters, too.
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Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed. 🙂
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