Friday Fictioneers is a weekly blog link-up led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at Addicted to Purple. The Challenge – write a one hundred word (plus or minus) story with a beginning, middle, and end inspired by the picture*. The Key – make every word count.
The picture is worth a thousand words. Below are my one hundred.
Image © David Stewart
Take Me Away
Every morning Juliet slips out of the bed she shares with her sisters in their one-bedroom apartment. She goes outside and pulls a note from the rolled-up newspaper in the gate. She stashes it in her pocket. After her sisters leave for school she reads the note, composes her reply, then goes to the factory to clean.
My love,
I will come for you.
Samuel
On her way out she puts her reply in the same newspaper.
My love,
Please take me away.
Juliet
For ten years they write. When her youngest sister graduates, Samuel comes and takes Juliet away.
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Reblogged this on nimeelohspeaks and commented:
Didn’t even realise that those were a hundred words!!!
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Really sweet story 🙂
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Thank you
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Good one!
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Thank you
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I like a happy ending – all comes to she who waits!
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Thanks Keith. 🙂
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Very sweet and romantic. I love love stories like this one.
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Thank you Deborah!
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Ahhhh, very nice.
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Thank you Paul!
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Ten years is a lot of sisterly love.
Good piece.
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Indeed it is. Thanks Mick!
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There’s nothing like a newspaper to carry the news – old news and new news. Randy
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And a special section. 🙂 Thanks for coming by Randy.
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Nice sentiments, well done.
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Thank you Sandra.
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Hope it was Juliet he came for, and not the youngest sister.
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OoO… Good catch. I intended “her” to be Juliet, but there is ambiguity there. I think I’ll fix that. Thanks!
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Now that’s love and a lot of patience. I’m glad this Juliet had a happy ending, Melanie. Very sweet story.
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Thanks Amy! May we all find our happy ending. 🙂
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🙂
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That’s lovely. Such devotion to duty… Now that she’s free to leave, she can be happy.
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Good things come to those who wait. 🙂
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Ahh, a sweet love story!
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Thank you!
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Intriguing story. I like at how it hints at a much larger story.
-David
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Thank you David. There are a couple of stories happening here. Thank you for noticing.
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Why did he wait ten years? The sister should have welcomed Juliet’s man into the fold.
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I suppose the possible reasons for waiting are infinite. I honestly can’t answer that: I only explored Juliet’s story, not Samuel’s. Maybe he felt her responsibilities to her sisters trumped his desire to have her for his own?
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Melanie, you have inspired me to start doing writing challenges. just thought you should know 🙂
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Yay!! I have so much fun with them. I hope you do too!
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